http://zahrawithaz.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] zahrawithaz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] frayadjacent 2014-11-16 03:41 am (UTC)

WOW.

I love the way Helena takes over the narrative when the music turns more discordant--it felt like a reference to her signature leitmotif--and there are so many clever and interesting moments to praise. I like that you take so much time to ground the story in Sarah & Felix & their relationship before opening it up; I love the parallel of Sarah looking up at the mansion ceiling & being trapped in the bathroom; I love the happy montage at the end & the fact that Alison & her husband hiding the body is included in it! Great work all around.

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